Grade: B+
Category: Uncategorized (Page 10 of 18)
Michael couldn’t remember the last time he’d had sex with Frannie and there were so many rules he was no longer tempted to try. Weeknights were out, she was too tired from housework and spin class and book club and keeping up with her favorite programs on telly. Sundays were a no-go; she tended to go out with the girlfriends after church and preferred a nice long evening with the telly when she returned. That left Saturday, and then Michael had to be freshly showered, the kids had to be either asleep or out of the house and Frannie had to be in the mood. The likelihood of all these factors coming together was about as favourable as a total eclipse…
…But now he was thirty-four and more frustrated than ever. Frannie wouldn’t even let him hold her and masturbate, she found the very idea juvenile and borderline deviant.
Miss Lowell, you magnificent creature. I want you to paint your own canvas. I want you to unveil yourself.
I was sad for Ash about the distance he felt with his brothers and I liked that Margaret championed his cause. He was someone who was everyone else’s champion it seemed, but not many people seemed to realise he occasionally needed some of that treatment himself.
Margaret herself doesn’t always act predictably either and I also liked her very much too. I remember reading along and thinking “oh no! don’t do that!” and then, she didn’t and I sighed with relief. I’m not usually a fan of plots based on lies or misunderstandings but Ms. Milan can pull it off because she her characters are smart and unpredictable.
As much as the blurb sets the book up as being about revenge, I didn’t really feel that was Ash’s main motivation at all. There was a little bit of that sure, but mostly he wanted to secure his brothers’ futures and he absolutely believed (and he was right) that he’d be a better Duke than the heretofore heir. Ash has mountains of self belief, but the thing is, he’s mostly right. It’s not actually arrogance if you’re correct! 🙂 I think Ms. Milan can do something really rare – make a genuinely good man an interesting hero without him being boring, or doormat material. It is so uncommon and it sucks me right in.
I also appreciated that the old Duke was a miserable old sod and (*mildly spoilery*) he stayed that way. There was no miraculous recantation of previous wrongs. He was just a pig. I liked how Margaret dealt with him; how she chose her own behaviour towards him for her own reasons and not because of any reaction to his cruelty.
*spoilers ahoy*
Why I read it: I picked this one up because I thought the storyline sounded interesting and I like trying new authors. I thought I would like it. I didn’t.
I got about 1/3 the way through it before I gave up. I didn’t enjoy the writing and I didn’t think the characters were well drawn. I didn’t like the world building. I thought it was a good idea but it didn’t deliver.
What it’s about: The basic set up is that new Angel Serena is given the assignment of protecting a bad boy Hollywood actor, Nick Ramirez. She trails him to Devil’s Paradise, a club run by Archdemon Julian Ascher.
What worked for me: I thought the premise was interesting and the cover is pretty but I did not enjoy the execution. Maybe it got better after I stopped reading though.
What didn’t: We’re told that Julian is the baddest of the bad demons; he enjoys corrupting human souls and has no remorse for any of his actions. Next thing, Serena’s pricking his “conscience”. (“It pricked at his conscience for a moment – kissing an angel was surely some kind of sin”) Hur?
Serena on the other hand, is seriously lacking in the kick-ass department. Much to my surprise, she was immediately attracted to the Archdemon at their first meeting. I would have much preferred a slow build of attraction given the diversity of their characters but, because he’s hot, she’s horny. I found it a bit hard to believe.
Also, her angel supervisor, Arielle, has totally set her up and has given her no support for her secret task, so I felt she was unlikeable too.
But, what really got to me was on p65. Julian materialises in Serena’s house while she is sleeping. They barely know each other but she’s piqued his interest.
“Awake, she’d never have let him touch her like this. But now, as she slept, he took liberties that would have made her shriek with fury during waking hours. He got into bed with her, sliding under the covers with a carefully practiced stealth…”
then he feels her up til she wakes and he dematerialises.
This is NOT hero material for me. Dude, that’s sexual assualt = NOT SEXY. It is apparent from the bit I quoted, that he knew she DID NOT WANT but did it anyway. No thank you.
I did read on a little from there but I found nothing in Julian’s character that I was interested in reading about further. He did not come across to me as a sexy misunderstood demon or as someone who could be redeemed. He then decides to force Serena to choose between her soul or her brother’s and blackmails her into staying with him. At that point I stopped reading.
What else? Maybe Ms. Chong is able to pull of the redemption of Julian but I couldn’t bring myself to care. To me, he’d already crossed into irretrievable territory and I had to put the book down.
I can see from other reviews on Goodreads that I am a bit of an outlier though, but this book was definitely not for me. YMMV.
Grade: DNF

What else: As a whole, I found the story strangely romantic (considering the plot) with a hopeful and appropriate (if somewhat simplistic) ending. Sexy and unusual and well worth my time. If you’re after something short, different and hot, look no further.
Grade: B+